I'm looking for commentary!
I'm working on another "book", as some of you may know (those who have researched my blogs a little and found Once Around the Ride). I would appreciate it if some of you could give me your honest thoughts on the stories i have posted on this blog so i could analyze and transfer them to my notes for this new book.
Also, if there is anything you would like to see in this book please let me know and i will consider those ideas. I'm kind of low on ideas right now because i'm looking for something original and different from what i have always done in the past. I promise i won't take your ideas and write them as-is. i'll shape them into my own and create something i think would compliment my unique voice. I promise to only take pieces and morph them into my own. If that's something you even want to do, because i know a few of you have made requests and have seen my facebook page (those who have researched my page and found my facebook profile).
For the commentary i am asking for, i'm not looking for something very descriptive. I don't necessarily want a paragraph explaining your favorite character. If you look under the title of my blog, you can see that i have a little snippet of commentary. This is what i'm expecting. The one included in the strip between the title and the posts is more of a description that i wrote long ago. That will suffice if you can't come up with a small snip.
If you decide to provide a piece of commentary, i want to say thank you. I feel like i ask too much of you when i'm only supposed to post and you're only supposed to read. But, we connect better this way, right?
Thank You,
Kayla
P.S. Here is the link to the start of my book, for those of you who have not done as much research into my blogs and didn't know this existed.
http://oncearoundtheride1985.blogspot.com/
Im not good at reviews but i will try!! XD
ReplyDeleteIn one of the most unique and jarring novels of a nineteen eightes rock band, Kayla captures the scene with concrete and memorable characters.
LOL i definetly had to use the online thesaurus! i hope this works! i would love to see my work show up somewhere soon! XD
Kayla shares the story of Cinderella's rise to fame and their struggle to maintain a romantic relationship with their long time girlfriends.
ReplyDeleteA story of a 20th century rock band reveals, with raw-edged candor, Cinderella's endeavor to conserve their name in the local clubs of philadelphia and in the music industry.
ReplyDeletefocused on the music part. i didnt know how to add the girls in there... reviews are hard!!! i wouldnt be suprised if you didnt want to use this..
"I was so obsessed with this story." -Amanda Dayer
ReplyDelete"Brilliantly plotted and perfectly paced." -Amanda Dayer
"The genuine characters and real world situations make this book a pleasure to read." -Amanda Dayer
im not good with fancy words and correct review format but this is what i have to say about your storys!
ReplyDelete"Kayla writes in such a manner that brings authenticity to her work. Her characters are simply a work of art and her story is the masterpiece. I became obsessed with her writing the moment i finished the first chapter." -Courtney Corvette
"Kayla's stories are the best!" -Addie
ReplyDelete"Kayla doesn't write fanfiction. She writes nonfiction in a way that true published authors do." -Riley
oh my.. i dont think i can top any of the previous reviews...
ReplyDelete"I enjoy reading Kayla's stories and they inspire me to dream big in a way that anything can happen and hidden talents are a thing to treasure."
lol i sort of read the history page on once around the ride.